Ahh, this would be why I always need beta-help. Because I think things totally make sense, and then others have to poke me and let me know that it's not as easily connected as in my head. I've edited to add in Kankurou's name. You can really tell that this was written during the end of my last semester and is thus rough and crazy in places. >_>;; I'm glad you managed to enjoy it despite the flaws! <3
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